Moriah Leila

I like too talk a lot too. And I forget what I am going to say a lot too. I don't want you to be offended by any of my ...

Hey back again to review. I was able to read a few of the other's reviews but I am a tad lazy and skipped over sorsha's so hopefully I don't ...

I think this is a great beginning. Your plot is very strong and your characters are interesting. However, I would like more of a physical description of Noel and her ...

I think this is a great beginning. Your plot is very strong and your characters are interesting. However, I would like more of a physical description of Noel and her ...

Here is the third installment. Please, please be brutally honest, tear it to shreds!!! I am feeling a little cocky about this piece so I could really use an ego-check!! ...

Wow, I really like this story. Very interesting and unique, nothing like any of the other fantasy stories I have read. And your characters are so strong and intruiguing. I ...

A very interesting start, although I had to go back through and reread it because I was a little confused. Maybe you could clear this up if you stated who ...

Hmmm. This story is okay. I don't see any real plot except that you talk a lot about how clumsy Clover is. There are quite a few cliches and the ...

Ok, this needs work. Sorry is that too blunt? I really like your characters, they are very interesting and your descriptions are good. You do write good descriptions of people ...

I need critiques; the more brutal, the better. Her father’s funeral was a simple affair held that evening. At dusk, his stiff body was laid into a plundered rowboat. Jo ...

Again a great work. I don't think I have much to add except my praise. I love your characters, they are so strong and realistic. I also like how they ...

You are such a talented writer, I hope you know that. You have a very good sense of your characters and you bring them to life. I feel as if ...

Very intruitguing. I like it so far, very original, and I like the idea of the seven orbs. Also your characters are vey well developed and it is nice to ...

I like how you redid the fairy tale, it is always fun to have an alternate ending. As for the labor scene well I just wasn't all that satisfied with ...

I think everyone basically covered what I was going to say. I do like your piece because like ashley said you made me think. However I did find a few ...